Defining the Modern News Story
The following newspaper article appeared in the Sacramento
Daily Union on Nov. 13, 1857.
A man named Benjamin Hamilton was convicted before the
Recorder some time since, and sentenced to pay a fine of $50
and costs, for malicious mischief, in wounding a cow, the
property of Mrs. Jones, who resides at the corner of P and Front
streets. A motion for new trial was subsequently granted, and
the case re-tried before a jury yesterday, resulting in a verdict of
guilty, and a recommendation that the defendant be fined $5 and
costs, or be imprisoned 5 days. The verdict was confirmed by
the judgment of the Court, and the fine promptly paid. The cow
had been browsing on hay on the levee in the above vicinity,
and was seen suddenly to run across the street, “lowing
frantically,” with a hay hook sticking in her right shoulder, the
defendant being in hot pursuit. No one saw defendant commit
the offense, but as he had been seen about that time at work at
the hay, and turned from the pursuit when Mrs. Jones appeared
at her door, the presumption of his guilt was probably deemed
sufficiently strong to warrant his conviction. The trial occupied
considerable time — was warmly contested by counsel on either
side, and the merits and demerits of circumstantial evidence
were very fully discussed.
A. How does this story differ from a contemporary report of a similar incident?
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B. After reading the above article, write an effective lead.Before sending along, use the following criteria to evaluate your work..
- Are the 5 W’s and H stacked most important to least?
- Is the lead free of unattributed opinion?
- 30 words or fewer?
- Active voice?
- Free of unfamiliar proper nouns?
- redundancies
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